UNhappy monday!
In her essay naps Barbra Holland raises many points that make her arfguement quite strong. She starts with an anecdote from her travel to France. She expeiernced first hand the role napping has on the culture. Following that she talks about heow all over the worl people nap regularly. Then she talks about how the nap has its role in the workplace. In this portion she mentions the use of naps in Japanese workplaces.
Her arguement is structured to have a “for” arguement then a counter arguement. I think she could have put all the counter arguements at the end instead of throughout tho help the reader form and opinion.
I agree with her that naps would be beneficial. I know for me that sleeping gives me much needed energy. For example, when I am at volleyball tournaments we are forced to wake up at as early a four in the morning and by sleeping inbetween games I refresh myself and have more energy.
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